Eldan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[D&W: Origins S2 37]

It was: okay

I have a couple of issues you should work on:
1.- Preloader. you lack one, this is like trying to buff a video trough youtube with a bad connection, it stops ever so often.
2.- Subs are too fast, most of the time i couldnt read the whole of it, maybe you should make them say on screen longer.

On a side note. The general art was on the bland side, but the effects were pro-looking, keep practicing. The SFX and the music were on spot and of great quality, and were the main reason i rated 5 instead of 1.

AxelTheAs responds:

I'm sorry but I was rhinking that this loader will work fine u___u' I'll search for a new one.

[KFox Xenon]

Quite alright

The animation could had been better, but the music by itself drags it over to being quite a nice production, so keep up the good work... at some point after 1:30 and 2:00 the music and visuals got slightly out of sync, you could go on ahead and try and fix that.

[Ibuki vs Makoto 2]

it was okay...

i have only one thing to say: try that all sprites are of the same sizes, this meaning, some sprites had HUGE pixels in comparison to others, and that really sets it off. animation wise, everything looked okay. My real concern is with the sprites themselves, also, clean up your act, try to crop them so that they dont have that white border around them.

jqzjqz responds:

This flash was zoomed by 140%. I'm not exactly sure why I used this size, but it did make the sprite quality worse. I was just trying something new and different.

[Muppets 2011]

this was me during this movie:

okay...uh.... what?.... wh-wh-what?.... WHAT!?.... WHAAA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

[Animator vs Animation III]

It's been ages.

It's been ages since i last saw the previous Animator vs Animation, and this is just better than i remember. I remember the first time i saw the first, even though im not fond of sticky animations i though it was way up there in the cool area, years later, you've delivered even greater quality... Also, it's about damn time that stupid office clip was useful for something!

[Mouse-Drawn Johnny Ep1]

This was quite entertaining actually

It had an unique feeling to it wich kindof apealed to me. But you still have to work on stuff. The vid was a bit pixelated, you should probably want to work on that. Also the voices could barely be heard, you definatly want to fix that, also, you should stop the movie at the end and put a replay button and not just let i loop there. That's all i have to say; all things considered, good job.

secondtime responds:

I was told about the voice thing, I have no idea what happened there, it sounded fine on my computer.

I couldn't do anything about the pixelation or replay button, I used a converter.

Did you see the nurse's moustache?

[TRE: Teaser]

Too short

Everything was okay, but the movie was too short. You could have gone the extra mile and try to portray what you said as a comment, on the trailer. Im going to vote medium on this one.

[just a lil clip]

Sorry

Even thou the animation was good, i voted low because:
1. I lacks a preloader and a replay button.
2. Sound quality was lacking... greatly
3. Video quality was lacking too.

You should want to check the FAQs here in the page for a preloader and some hints on flash making, and then try again.

jhypsyshah responds:

diggity dig.

It seems I remember it recommending an uploader, when I was submitting but it seemed like it was action script oriented? I'm not using adobe flash.

Curious if that is something someone could add though.

Tend to use alt' programs, trial and error and what-ever i can get my paws on.. so feedback can be helpful XD

[MK vs DCU]

WOW!

first time i ever REALLY like a sprite movie... I gotta give it to ya there, I was scared for a moment when Sub-Zero went all blue, i thought you were going to get super saiyayin on us... lucklily, you did it and THANK YOU for not doing so... The rest of the movie, wow... Sonia fighting flash while sub-zero is taken by super man on the background, read my thoughts there... didnt knew which fight to actually look at XD

[The Greatest Idea Ever!]

OMG!

The Greatest Idea Ever!
I totally loved your flash man, it was freaking hillarous, specially the part where the black haired scientist talked the red haired one into finally powering up the thing, SO ren & stimpy there, and it ended up doing "blap".... ha ha ha ha.