Eldan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[le hipster]

HA HA HA HA, i dont know why but i really laughed so much to this. 5 for the laughter. also... uh... the dude has a right arm in his left arm?

alexsnowskate responds:

Thanks man! I thought nobody would see the arm thing. Hipstersare all like that...

[FUS RO DOMINATION]

thank you for trying, it was acually good. you should try and browse newgrounds forums for tips on how to use the program and also should get your hands onto the preloader. On the first part it almost gave me a seizure the flashing black and white, you should watch out with that. other than that, a very good first flash.

MikeDasProfessor responds:

Fixed, please read description. thank you

[Rejected Zelda commerical]

I did played Ocarina of time, and no, i do not think it is THE BEST FUCKING GAME EVER MADE BY MANKIND UNTIL THE END OF TIME, like most people out there seem to think, frankly the game is way too overrated, but whatever... The flash was actually really nice, and the music frighteningly catchy. Too bad it doesn't loops seamlessly. Keep up the good work

ananasz responds:

It's sad that you cannot even appreciate this animation as a simple parody that easily defends or ridicules the game, depending on your own preference, and instead go on an absolute rage fest.
But thank you either way.

[D&W: Origins S2 37]

It was: okay

I have a couple of issues you should work on:
1.- Preloader. you lack one, this is like trying to buff a video trough youtube with a bad connection, it stops ever so often.
2.- Subs are too fast, most of the time i couldnt read the whole of it, maybe you should make them say on screen longer.

On a side note. The general art was on the bland side, but the effects were pro-looking, keep practicing. The SFX and the music were on spot and of great quality, and were the main reason i rated 5 instead of 1.

AxelTheAs responds:

I'm sorry but I was rhinking that this loader will work fine u___u' I'll search for a new one.

[Ibuki vs Makoto 2]

it was okay...

i have only one thing to say: try that all sprites are of the same sizes, this meaning, some sprites had HUGE pixels in comparison to others, and that really sets it off. animation wise, everything looked okay. My real concern is with the sprites themselves, also, clean up your act, try to crop them so that they dont have that white border around them.

jqzjqz responds:

This flash was zoomed by 140%. I'm not exactly sure why I used this size, but it did make the sprite quality worse. I was just trying something new and different.

[Mouse-Drawn Johnny Ep1]

This was quite entertaining actually

It had an unique feeling to it wich kindof apealed to me. But you still have to work on stuff. The vid was a bit pixelated, you should probably want to work on that. Also the voices could barely be heard, you definatly want to fix that, also, you should stop the movie at the end and put a replay button and not just let i loop there. That's all i have to say; all things considered, good job.

secondtime responds:

I was told about the voice thing, I have no idea what happened there, it sounded fine on my computer.

I couldn't do anything about the pixelation or replay button, I used a converter.

Did you see the nurse's moustache?

[just a lil clip]

Sorry

Even thou the animation was good, i voted low because:
1. I lacks a preloader and a replay button.
2. Sound quality was lacking... greatly
3. Video quality was lacking too.

You should want to check the FAQs here in the page for a preloader and some hints on flash making, and then try again.

jhypsyshah responds:

diggity dig.

It seems I remember it recommending an uploader, when I was submitting but it seemed like it was action script oriented? I'm not using adobe flash.

Curious if that is something someone could add though.

Tend to use alt' programs, trial and error and what-ever i can get my paws on.. so feedback can be helpful XD

[MS Paint 3D]

wow!

that was really impressive!... it was really cool how the crappy "paint-like" drawing rendered into a cool 3D graphic, i wish my MS paint would do that, ha ha!.

you're good! keep up the good work pal.

also, where's that song from?... it was great!

Monkeycraft responds:

Thanks! the song is the theme song for The Neverhood, 1996 PC CD-ROM Claymation video game. Its where I got the idea for this project.

[Castlevania: Wicked Child]

Exellent work!

You just dont know how much i identified myself with your flash, that happens to me EVERYTIME i encounter a fleaman, annoying pests. I loved your graphics, the characters were simple but the backgrounds are beautiful, and your tweens and frame by frame are simply impecable. You also sync-ed the song perfectly... This flash has to be in my favorite list!. (8/10) (5/5)

Connoisseur responds:

When I started making this video, I had no idea if everyone else hated fleamen as much as me. It's good to know they do. Thanks, reviews like these always make my day.

[Sounds of CS]

Great.

I have only 2 things to say about this flash that I didnt liked AT ALL:

1. It's a stickie flash, i hate stickies, you should have made real drawings for the little of animation you used there.
2. right before they swamped into silenced guns, the video got boring, because it repeated itself over and over and over, and even after the terrorists placed the bomb, you went into the same loop again.

Great song, good job... well done!.
Score 4/5
Rating 7/10

StealthBeast responds:

1: haters gonna hate.
2: Agreed.