It was: okay
I have a couple of issues you should work on:
1.- Preloader. you lack one, this is like trying to buff a video trough youtube with a bad connection, it stops ever so often.
2.- Subs are too fast, most of the time i couldnt read the whole of it, maybe you should make them say on screen longer.
On a side note. The general art was on the bland side, but the effects were pro-looking, keep practicing. The SFX and the music were on spot and of great quality, and were the main reason i rated 5 instead of 1.